An Easy Mistake To Make……(another dress story)

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[ Anthropologie Big Sky Sweater here and Vintner's Landscape Dress here]

An Easy Mistake To Make

As if sitting next to a vulgar old man for three hours wasn't enough, when Penelope arrived at the station, Marcus was not there. She stood for a long while on the platform, scanning faces–all strangers.

"The dress was perfect until you threw Granny's afghan over it," her brother had said before she boarded the train.

"It's not a blanket!" she'd protested, "it's a sweater!"

"Fine. It's a blanket with arm-holes," he said, laughing. "Good luck. You'll need it."

His words echoed in her mind now. She felt increasingly embarrassed, standing alone in her big sweater, clutching her train-case.

What did she and Marcus have, anyway? A few hours in a Colorado bookstore, a handful of passionate emails, one long distance call. The sweater wasn't the true mistake, she realized. Being silly and impulsive was.

"You don't go rushing headlong into love," her mother had tsk-tsk'd. "But it's an easy mistake to make."

And, Penelope added to herself as she purchased a return ticket home, you obviously don't throw an afghan over it.

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  • http://www.heidijowhatdoyouknow.blogspot.com Heidi Jo

    wow. short stories with elizabeth! what a creative cat you are:0)

    i shared my news on my blog;0)

  • Sarah O.

    love it! Thanks for the “escape”. :)

  • http://www.timesinourlife.blogspot.com Dawn

    You should be writing books. These little ditties are cool, you mind must go a mile a minute.

  • http://www.goodforsomething-stilltrying.blogspot.com Frances, New Yorker in the OC

    I was totally sucked in. What a great way to translate that picture. Definitely looking forward to more of these–they’re great!

  • http://fiction.minthegap.com MInTheGap

    Cute story– neat use of inspiration. I should do some more of this type of thing– finding pictures and writing shorts.

    You’ve inspired me here. Good work!